A fantastic story Evie! Always a pleasure to read.
I love how the stars were ‘scattered’ high in the sky and I love the phrase ‘whispering to the moon’. You have included lots of wonderful adjectives and expanded noun phrases. Next time, try to challenge yourself with varied punctuation.
A fantastic story Evie! Always a pleasure to read.
I love how the stars were ‘scattered’ high in the sky and I love the phrase ‘whispering to the moon’. You have included lots of wonderful adjectives and expanded noun phrases. Next time, try to challenge yourself with varied punctuation.