Wow Bella what an interesting story – I really love how you related your character to the one child policy in China that now has become the two child policy since 2013.
The only critique I can offer is to be careful not to go off target for too long, and to be care with your editing. Eg. You wrote family don’t as opposed to family doesn’t*
However I really enjoyed reading this and I shared it with my sister Bella 🙂
Wow Bella what an interesting story – I really love how you related your character to the one child policy in China that now has become the two child policy since 2013.
The only critique I can offer is to be careful not to go off target for too long, and to be care with your editing. Eg. You wrote family don’t as opposed to family doesn’t*
However I really enjoyed reading this and I shared it with my sister Bella 🙂
Ms. Dawson