Wonderful ideas. You start very strongly and use your punctuation well, but by the third paragraph you have very little punctuation. Use your punctuation to elevate your story! Punctuation: the marks, such as full stop, comma, and brackets, used in writing to separate sentences and their elements and to clarify meaning. (Got it?)
Wonderful ideas. You start very strongly and use your punctuation well, but by the third paragraph you have very little punctuation. Use your punctuation to elevate your story! Punctuation: the marks, such as full stop, comma, and brackets, used in writing to separate sentences and their elements and to clarify meaning. (Got it?)
Keep up the good work.
TG