Great work Ayub. Here are some tips: Instead of saying ‘She tried everything she climbed trees after trees to find their location,’ I would have changed it to ‘She tried everything. Exhausted, she climbed tree after tree to find their new location.’
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Great work Ayub.
Here are some tips:
Instead of saying ‘She tried everything she climbed trees after trees to find their location,’
I would have changed it to ‘She tried everything. Exhausted, she climbed tree after tree to find their new location.’