Great work Lavinia,
Remember to start sentences with capital letters and leave a space after full stops.
“it took her a while but finally after every night of making it she finished.”
What could you have written instead of ‘making it’ to make your writing more fluid and literacy rich?
it took her a while but finally after every night if building it she finished. 🙂
Lavinia
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Great work Lavinia,
Remember to start sentences with capital letters and leave a space after full stops.
“it took her a while but finally after every night of making it she finished.”
What could you have written instead of ‘making it’ to make your writing more fluid and literacy rich?
it took her a while but finally after every night if building it she finished. 🙂
Lavinia