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Your story uses a lot of descriptive language which makes your work interesting to read!
Please try not to use a pronoun twice in one sentence- you must write the noun. Eg. Your wrote: Although the baby possums were scared of it they wouldn’t let it stop them from finding a new home.
To be more specific you could have written:Although the baby possums were scared of the lightning they wouldn’t let it stop them from finding a new home.
Well done Isaac,
Remember to sign your posts with only your first name 🙂
Your story uses a lot of descriptive language which makes your work interesting to read!
Please try not to use a pronoun twice in one sentence- you must write the noun. Eg. Your wrote: Although the baby possums were scared of it they wouldn’t let it stop them from finding a new home.
To be more specific you could have written:Although the baby possums were scared of the lightning they wouldn’t let it stop them from finding a new home.
thank you Miss Dawson for the compliment. I hope you are well.