That’s put me right off snowball fights. Wonderful stuff with some great detail. Don’t forget to keep choosing vocabulary and imagery that sets the tone of your piece to build the suspense. At the start you have “icy” and “bitter” which work well to build the sense of impending doom.
Enjoying seeing what your are busy with.
That’s put me right off snowball fights. Wonderful stuff with some great detail. Don’t forget to keep choosing vocabulary and imagery that sets the tone of your piece to build the suspense. At the start you have “icy” and “bitter” which work well to build the sense of impending doom.
Enjoying seeing what your are busy with.
TG
Amazing Hadley. khadidja