Emily, I have way too many questions?
Who or how did you get sucked in to the fence? Who was responsible for taking your things? What did you say to your parents? How did you manage to get to your parents?
As exciting as your ending is, you have moved the story along too fast!
Could you have another go at this?
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Emily, I have way too many questions?
Who or how did you get sucked in to the fence? Who was responsible for taking your things? What did you say to your parents? How did you manage to get to your parents?
As exciting as your ending is, you have moved the story along too fast!
Could you have another go at this?