Great start to a story. When you see the plane you should add description with adjectives, similes and metaphors. What does the metal look like? Is it torn and jagged or dented and smashed like an old tin can, or both?
Have you read Walkabout? It’s a good classic read and has a similar plot to your story so far.
Great start to a story. When you see the plane you should add description with adjectives, similes and metaphors. What does the metal look like? Is it torn and jagged or dented and smashed like an old tin can, or both?
Have you read Walkabout? It’s a good classic read and has a similar plot to your story so far.
TG