SP Possum
Have a look at your story stater: -The first sentence ‘It their hibernation season’ -Had be destroyed by a bear’
Always remember to proof read your work, other than that it was very good. Well done for using brackets for parenthesis.
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Possum
Have a look at your story stater:
-The first sentence ‘It their hibernation season’
-Had be destroyed by a bear’
Always remember to proof read your work, other than that it was very good. Well done for using brackets for parenthesis.