Rumpelstiltskin

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  1. sfallon says:

    Well done Jahmai.

    However, you must always remember to punctuate your direct speech (the part inside the speech marks) with either a comma, a question mark or an exclamation mark. Then a full stop at the end of the part when you say who is talking.

    E.g.

    “What is your name?” she asked.

    “Rumpelstiltskin,” he responded.

    “Rumpel stilt skin,” she said.

    ”NO! You know what? Never mind what my name is. I’m here to help you,”he explained.

    ”Help me to do what?”she asked.

    ‘To turn straw into gold of course!”

    ”Ok,”she replied.

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