queen bee

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  1. ddawson says:

    Great work Domino, very descriptive!

    Their- Is to show ownership
    There- Is to show place

    Spelling- Outdoors*

    See how I have edited your second paragraph:

    The bees and wasps looked up to her as there Queen. She had extraordinary powers, for instance, the ability to control nature and the power to make flowers blossom. She could finally help protect the world instead of just training. She had spent months on training, even years! There were a few cons of being the queen bee. She had many responsibilities and would have to take care of each and every one of the bees and wasps.

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