Well done Finn, Kew Gardens is a great idea, lots of flowers for her.
Always remember to write in the past tense as it is a story, it has already happened. For example: Rather than ‘She decided to live here for know’ change the ‘here’ to ‘there’ e.g. ‘She decided to live there for the time being..’
Well done Finn, Kew Gardens is a great idea, lots of flowers for her.
Always remember to write in the past tense as it is a story, it has already happened. For example: Rather than ‘She decided to live here for know’ change the ‘here’ to ‘there’ e.g. ‘She decided to live there for the time being..’