Great work Alex!
Spelling- Ordinary* surrounded*
Really lovely story! Remember to put a comma before speech marks.
….and said ,”I swear to myself I’ll never hurt another bee again!”
Sick sentences – The foggy forest was filled with the sound of swarming bees.
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Great work Alex!
Spelling- Ordinary* surrounded*
Really lovely story! Remember to put a comma before speech marks.
….and said ,”I swear to myself I’ll never hurt another bee again!”
Sick sentences – The foggy forest was filled with the sound of swarming bees.