Queen Bee Ahlam

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  1. sfallon says:

    Well done Ahlam, you have used some really great descriptive phrases. However, always proof read over work.
    For example
    ‘she didn’t look nice kind at all.’ and ‘The way the Queen Bee development was outrageous.’ don’t completely make sense, you have added some incorrect words/word endings, so always check over it first.

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