Very descriptive Bella but you have forgotten to use commas in your second paragraph. Also, be sure to slow down and double check for SPAG mistakes generally.
Your writing is very exciting and fun to read overall.
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Very descriptive Bella but you have forgotten to use commas in your second paragraph. Also, be sure to slow down and double check for SPAG mistakes generally.
Your writing is very exciting and fun to read overall.