Wow Grace – You are getting better everyday at your descriptive writing. I love how you wrote where the animals originally came from in your opening paragraph.
Be sure to read your work aloud when you are editing to double check you are writing how you would speak…
You wrote:
grocery stores that sell all the food we have in our shops!
Wow Grace – You are getting better everyday at your descriptive writing. I love how you wrote where the animals originally came from in your opening paragraph.
Be sure to read your work aloud when you are editing to double check you are writing how you would speak…
You wrote:
grocery stores that sell all the food we have in our shops!
But I am not sure what you meant to say.