You have raised lots of vaild points, mentioned the eat well plate and spoke of a balanced diet.
Just a few tips:
-Use a capital letter for ‘Very’ (your title)
-Instead of: When you do healthy eating you should also do exercise, instead I would have written: When you begin eating healthy food, or when you consume your diet of healthy food.
-Instead of: Unhealthy food is biscuit’s and crisps, ‘is’ refers to just one thing, you mentioned two things so you need to use ‘are’
Well done Zaki, I like the humour in this 🙂
You have raised lots of vaild points, mentioned the eat well plate and spoke of a balanced diet.
Just a few tips:
-Use a capital letter for ‘Very’ (your title)
-Instead of: When you do healthy eating you should also do exercise, instead I would have written: When you begin eating healthy food, or when you consume your diet of healthy food.
-Instead of: Unhealthy food is biscuit’s and crisps, ‘is’ refers to just one thing, you mentioned two things so you need to use ‘are’