Well done, I am intrigued to find out what he made…
Just a few tips:
-Always include capital letters at the start of each new sentence.
-Well done for including brackets for parenthesis (extra information) but remember you can include other pieces of punctuation for extra information e.g. an embedded/relative clause or dashes for parenthesis.
Well done, I am intrigued to find out what he made…
Just a few tips:
-Always include capital letters at the start of each new sentence.
-Well done for including brackets for parenthesis (extra information) but remember you can include other pieces of punctuation for extra information e.g. an embedded/relative clause or dashes for parenthesis.