watery world

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  1. ddawson says:

    Wow Lavinia! What great work!! It is amazing that you have completed ALL the assignments from literacy today 🙂 I am really enjoying your clever use of vocabulary.

    ‘Living in a tank had its pros: for example, if Sean weren’t trapped in the tank he would be able to get to Australia from England in about 50 mins.’ this isn’t a pro though… also remember you use a colon when you are going to write a list. So if you gave a list of pros after the colon then it would have been used correctly.

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