More super stuff. Your descriptive passage has two pieces of repetition, however. Can you spot them? No? Yes? I’ll tell you anyway: “blink of an eye, an eye-catching tiger” and “on top of the tables, his sheer weight making the tables crack.”
The second one can be fixed with a simple pronoun but the first one needs a change of vocabulary. As both “blink of an eye” and “eye-catching” are great expressions you could always save one of them for another part of your writing.
Maths is going great guns.
More super stuff. Your descriptive passage has two pieces of repetition, however. Can you spot them? No? Yes? I’ll tell you anyway: “blink of an eye, an eye-catching tiger” and “on top of the tables, his sheer weight making the tables crack.”
The second one can be fixed with a simple pronoun but the first one needs a change of vocabulary. As both “blink of an eye” and “eye-catching” are great expressions you could always save one of them for another part of your writing.
Maths is going great guns.
TG