Well done. Remember we talked about getting the “tune” of the text, so that sounds like an information text? Your version is a bit too colloquial/chatty/friendly/casual to be that style. Keep trying Zaheer.
TG
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Well done. Remember we talked about getting the “tune” of the text, so that sounds like an information text? Your version is a bit too colloquial/chatty/friendly/casual to be that style. Keep trying Zaheer.
TG