magic by Ayub

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  1. sfallon says:

    Hi Ayub:)
    Thank you for posting your anwers in full sentences.
    Just a few tips:
    ‘because the other object would get easier’ – doesn’t really make sense, expand on this and make it really clear what your point is.

    ‘then he will go back to the city they want know’ – also that sentence is a little bit clumsy.

    Capital letter for ‘I’ always

    Always ensure you are proof reading your work 🙂

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