Hi Jack,
Thank you for sharing your work, I can see you are working hard 🙂 Please give your work a title so I know which task is which. Also, if it is easier you can type the answers into the blog.
Please ensure you are writing in full sentences, avoid starting a sentence with ‘so’ and avoid saying ‘he/his’ as the reader won’t know who you are referring to, always introduce the character first.
Hi Jack,
Thank you for sharing your work, I can see you are working hard 🙂 Please give your work a title so I know which task is which. Also, if it is easier you can type the answers into the blog.
Please ensure you are writing in full sentences, avoid starting a sentence with ‘so’ and avoid saying ‘he/his’ as the reader won’t know who you are referring to, always introduce the character first.