superman by ayub

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  1. sfallon says:

    Well done Ayub, but please remember to write in past tense as you are re-telling a story that has already happened e.g. The Instead of writing ‘problem is will they help or not, especially Batman is enemy.’ use past tense words like was rather than is e.g. ‘There was a problem, would any of them help out? Especially Batman, who was his sworn enemy’

    Also, always remember to answer in full sentences using part of the question to form your answer.

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