Shayaan, this is a very good piece of writing! I think you have made some really valid points, I particularly like how you have suggested having healthy drinks in vending machines and also donating the money to charity! Your counter argument is very strong too. Well done!
Shayaan, this is a very good piece of writing! I think you have made some really valid points, I particularly like how you have suggested having healthy drinks in vending machines and also donating the money to charity! Your counter argument is very strong too. Well done!