Very strong maths work again and I enjoyed your start to the story. You are good at developing your characters’ personalities through description and dialogue. Try to remember that “your” is possessive eg Your shoes are dirty, while “you’re” is a contraction eg You are getting your shoes dirty = you’re getting your shoes dirty. So – “you’re the guest…you’re bossy.”
If you want to embark on your own writing challenge at home then I am sure you have the skills to attempt something ambitious. Well done, Hadley!
Very strong maths work again and I enjoyed your start to the story. You are good at developing your characters’ personalities through description and dialogue. Try to remember that “your” is possessive eg Your shoes are dirty, while “you’re” is a contraction eg You are getting your shoes dirty = you’re getting your shoes dirty. So – “you’re the guest…you’re bossy.”
If you want to embark on your own writing challenge at home then I am sure you have the skills to attempt something ambitious. Well done, Hadley!
TG