Well done Daniel, I like how you have ended on a cliff hanger! But annoying for me as I want to know happens!
Tip: ‘right in front of there eyes’ should be ‘their’ as they eyes belong to them 🙂
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Well done Daniel, I like how you have ended on a cliff hanger! But annoying for me as I want to know happens!
Tip:
‘right in front of there eyes’ should be ‘their’ as they eyes belong to them 🙂